You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter give the details of the flight explain what the problem with the food was say what the airline should do about it.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter in relation to the experience I had while travelling in the ANZ670 flight
last
tuesday, 26th October 2021. I boarded the flight in the early morning of 26th from Singapore and I
was
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heading to New Zealand for my business trip.
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was twelve hours long flight and I did pay a fair share of money for
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ravel and
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ect certain level of standard from AirNZ, which was eventually tarnished. The food that I was given during
this
period was completely stale. The bread was soggy, rice was uncooked and the vegetables seemed to be very smelly. The yoghurt that
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ovided along
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with meal was expired with its expiry date being 21st
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st 2021.
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er the service provided by the stewards was far from being of what was expected of them. I really wish that AirNZ should take into the
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ideration th
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service they provide to their passengers in return to the value of their money and make essential ammendments to it or in the coming future the stauts of
this
airline will be seen failing. I hope
this
letter will enable to b
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me strategical change into their servicing skills of
this
airline. yours sincerely Neethu Babu
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