Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save the these traditions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is believed by some humans that when individuals used old
culture
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or tradition for their personal profits or benefits and attract visitors it may result in less
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of old fashions. Others ,
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hold the view that passing the information to others is the only way to save it. Both these views will be discussed adequately in
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view.
Firstly
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, if people started traditions for making money
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characteristics and uniqueness of
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will
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. To explain it,
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area has their own pattern which
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them from others.
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, if persons use their particular skills or patterns for making their profit
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it spread worldwide and these type of things become familiar with everybody and its importance automatically shrink and
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of visitors will
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.
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, individuals
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towards
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other
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culture
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cultures
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and forget their own
culture
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. To explain it, western-style clothes, food products and entertainments
activities
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become popular in some countries which may
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into
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the loss of their own tradition. Because of
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reason
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profit-making
activities
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or other
stuffs
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stuff
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which spread the
culture
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is the only way to save old festivals, languages and lifestyles. To exemplify, in India some ancient
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such
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as dance and songs become extinct, if tourists arrived in that area
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local people make profit from showing their skills and if they make money from old
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then
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they like to passed their skills and tradition to
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generation and it remained live
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particular
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region. To conclude, I strongly opine with
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view because of latest technology people forget their ancient
activities
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. If these
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types
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of
activities
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passed from
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the old
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generation to
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the new
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generation
then
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at least
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remained live in
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the local
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area.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Commercialization
  • Dilution of cultural traditions
  • Authenticity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Revenue
  • Financial support
  • Preservation
  • Promotion
  • Commodification of culture
  • Intrinsic value
  • Exposure
  • Global awareness
  • Respect and understanding
  • Economic gain
  • Local communities
  • Decision-making processes
  • Respectful portrayal
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