Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save the these traditions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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, if people started traditions for making money then
characteristics and uniqueness of culture
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For example
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it spread worldwide and these type of things become familiar with everybody and its importance automatically shrink and number
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In contrast
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. To explain it, western-style clothes, food products and entertainments activities
become popular in some countries which may results
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activities
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is the only way to save old festivals, languages and lifestyles. To exemplify, in India some ancient activities
such
as dance and songs become extinct, if tourists arrived in that area then
local people make profit from showing their skills and if they make money from old activities
then
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