Nowadays, people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done lack of sleep?

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to function well, getting enough sleep is very important. Nowadays, people who are having difficulties complains a lot. In
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I will discuss what are the reasons and the solutions for having a peaceful night.
To begin
with, resting is vital to recharge our mind and
body
, study shows that sleep is the most common relaxation after a tiring day.
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, there are many reasons to affect in getting enough of it,
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there are external factors,
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, busy cars (if living beside the street), uncomfortable
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, weather and many more. Another which is common for students and workers are having nightshifts or exams that you will have on the
next
day, unplanned events, and even social media. Staying on the phone like calling, chatting, watching are popular
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youngsters.
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in the evening, people should set their
body
clock which means having a pattern in setting time for sleeping and waking up,
this
technique helps the
body
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to it. Experts
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drinking warm milk helps and avoiding foods
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caffeine like coffee, chocolate and tea before going to bed. Having
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bath, wearing comfortable clothing, yoga, and having a clean room will set you in the mood too. In my conclusion, we all are having different
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to help us, we just need to check for the options and apply which can be suitable for us and train our
body
and soul to have a peaceful night.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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