Many believe that modern technology has people together, but others say it has driven us apart. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people deem that cutting edge
technology
brought individuals together. Others
however
hold the
view
that it has made the
distance
between humans. Both these views will be discussed adequately in the ensuing paragraphs. I will
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my opinion in the conclusion paragraph. To commence with, the former
view
. It is suggested that the main advantages of the advanced facilities are greater interaction with mankind. In the modern
era
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people like to communicate with others through online social media applications. To explain it, nowadays most
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businesses
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run through video
conference
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and online chatting. Because of
this
latest
accommodation
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humans from different countries and cultures are attracted
towards
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each
others
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.
For example
, India's prime minister Narendra Modi is used to
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the
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advanced
technology
for their virtual meetings and conferences with other countries
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and businessmen and he is trying to be connected with everyone around the globe.
On the other hand
, persons think that because of advanced
technology
distance
between mankind
are increase
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. To explain
this
statement, children are attracted to computer games and online platforms. Because of ,that they are do not made efforts to communicate with guests and remain busy with their phones.
For example
, a recent survey says that people were busy
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their phones at several family functions and even sometimes they did not know that who set beside them. Nowadays, humankind loves to make new friends on
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social media but
not
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interested in maintaining old
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. These type of activities results in the more and more
distance
between public. To conclude, I strongly opine with the later
view
, There are absolutely some great advantages of former
view
but because of new
technology
importance of old relation is fallen down and
distance
between humans
are
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increasing.
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