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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.

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In the cutting-edge era, technology has become an essential part of everybody life. In the
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 past
people
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 confused a lot of
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 the advantages of appliances are more compared to drawbacks and I will
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 explain both sides of
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 notion. Generally speaking, there are some
people
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technology works so effortlessly and reduces human workload. Perhaps, the predominant reason is that
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 the apparatus works accurately and, it is
also
 cost and
time
-efficient.
For example
, Asian textile in Bangladesh, produces bulk amounts of cloth which are low on price, high quality, with swifts delivery in no
time
. It is only possible because they have the world most advanced machines.
Moreover
, electric gadgets make women household chores easier.
As a result
, they do not need to spend long hours
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cleaning or in the kitchen. For illustration, the
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 a survey, it reported that
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 due to the increase of modern tools women are now enjoying more free
time
 ,unlike past.
On the other hand
, rising dependency on advanced technology
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 some negative development on
people
.
Firstly
,In the past folks doing all work by hand or more physically but
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 present
time
 they become lazier due to
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 use of devices.
As a result
, they are facing some diseases.
secondly
, It is true machinery goods are so cheap comparer to handmade but, the durability at low. For, example, one year aback I brought a shawl at a low price but I could not wear it for more than 6 months but my grandpa have a shawl which is almost 15 years older but still in good condition. To conclude, the benefits of modern devices are more as well as it is making
people
 life so comfortable and enjoyable.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Automation
  • Efficiency
  • Manual labor
  • Displacement
  • Homemaking skills
  • Technological advancements
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Resource depletion
  • Energy efficiency
  • Social dynamics
  • Operational understanding
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