While some think that the problem with education in poor countries is the teaching methodology used, others believe it is the lack of resources that is the real issue. Discuss both sides

There is a number of people who think education issue in non developed nations related to their teaching technique that they are using,while others regard that the depletion of origin is the main issue,in my perspective teaching skills is the key to come to a resolution for educational issues. In
this
essay
Add a comma
,essay
show examples
I will discuss both views in separate paragraphs and give my opinion with extended ideas and examples. Nowadays ,old training methods are not efficient anymore despite technology and demands of society,
for instance
,we all know that the old mathematics equipment replaced with the calculators and people can benefit them much faster and easier,
furthermore
Add a comma
,furthermore
show examples
the old fashioned techniques aren't practical any more and even they may disrupt students education path,
on the other
hand
Add the comma(s)
,hand
show examples
government
must consider a budget on educating instructors to improve their skills to cope with different range of pupils emotionally and mentally
also
,they can enrol different courses that are online or personal which is so beneficial for the community as well,in my point of view schools and
government
are in charge to correct teaching methodologies and prepare the healthy academic environment for lecturers and pupils.
Although
,there are some people who consider resources the real issue on educational problems in poor countries,
however
in
this
view administration of country can provide a situation for
teachers
and volunteers to immigrate to developed countries and attend the teacher training courses and
also
find the right references for teaching,
additionally
Add a comma
,additionally
show examples
if the regime would have supported them sooner,
then
the education condition hadn't faced problems.
moreover
,schools and university managers can ask their instructors to update their teaching knowledge bases and provide facilities for
teachers
who are encounters for educational problems.in my opinion
teachers
and
government
are responsible to prepare all demanded resources so student are able to pursue their ambitions without bumps on road. To conclude,
teachers
,schools in charge persons and prior to all
government
must put together all the resources as well as teaching methodologies because all students around the world have right to educate properly even in poorest nations.
Submitted by hadis.amn on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: