nowadays, people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done lack of sleep?

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Being not able to take a rest is one of the major issues that humankind facing

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I will be discussing the possible causes along with

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To begin

with, most people experiencing a lack of naps due to the demands of their works. There are some companies that

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do not have a flexible schedule and they suddenly changing the time without prior notice.

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, according to the survey 25% of employees working in Qatar’s factory complaint and experienced

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because most of them are need to work overtime instantly especially if there is a quota.

As a result

, their body clock is changing and if it happens in a long time it will lead you to hardly get adequate sleep.

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, certain problems will be developed like insomnia; the inability of a person to staying asleep at night and some

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cannot function as well as having difficulties

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do their particular works.

However

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will be solved by getting exercise regularly at least 30 minutes a day, avoid consuming too much caffeine or alcohol

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and try to do some bedtime rituals,

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as taking a warm bath, reading some books and listening to music in order to relax your mind.

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, certain tips will help you to have a good sleep at night. To conclude,

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the reasons and promote some ways. So that, it will not affects

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individual activities of daily living.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Insomnia
Sleep deprivation
Sleep disorders
Sleep quality
Fatigue
Exhaustion
Restless
Restorative sleep
REM sleep
Circadian rhythm
Sleep hygiene
Napping
Sleep duration
Melatonin
Sleep-inducing
Drowsiness
Sleep disturbances
Obstructive sleep apnea
Snoring
Sleepwalking
Sleep talking
Shift work
Sleeping pills
Sleep aid
Relaxation techniques
Meditation
Deep breathing

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nowadays, people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done lack of sleep?

Your opinion

Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, people encourage students to find part-time jobs while some people don't. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Is some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

People believe that arts like painting and music does not directly improve the quality of life, and therefore they think government’s money should be spent on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Museums and art gallaries should concentrate on works that show histrov and culture of their own countrv rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent to do vou aaree or disaaree?