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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#people #music #cultures #ages
Nowadays,
music related
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 topic has become a controversial issue.
Although
, there are some
people
 who believe that
music
connect
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connects
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people
 of all age groups and cultures together, while others
people
 do not support the idea that
music
 brings
close
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them close
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 to one another. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement,
music
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the music
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 industry has developed
the
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a
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 sense of connection among
people
 despite having differences. On the one hand, regarding
music
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the music
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 of different
culture
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cultures
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, the best part about
music
 is that no special skills are required like knowledge of
language
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the language
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.
In other words
, no need to learn
the
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a
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 foreign language to understand it, as it is amusing in
everyway
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every way
everyday
.
Hence
, the disparity among cultures would be not as effective as indifference among their ethnic groups.
For example
, many South Indian songs are popular in north
india
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, as there are
a lots
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a lot
lots
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 of
difference
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differences
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 in the language and culture. Even, these songs got recognition for celebration.
In addition
, by sharing the common
music
 playlist, it is easy to build
friendship
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a friendship
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 which ultimately benefits
the
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apply
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society.
Secondly
, for different age
people
, chances of making time to each other like the young
people
 and old
people
 unite easily because
music
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the music
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 would develop good understanding level by spending time together.
Consequently
,
the
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a
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 strong bond can
be easily build
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be easily built
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 between a child and their grandparents because of
common
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the common
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 interest
of
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in
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music
. In conclusion, despite having differences of cultures and age, a person
have
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 developed the understanding level to a certain stage by knowing others through the medium of
music
 independently. I extremely
supports
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this
 statement that
the
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music
 brings
people
 closer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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