More and more students are choosing to study in another country for higher education. Do the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?
One of the conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the students choosing their higher studies abroad ,thanks to the ubiquity of state-of-the-art technology,modernisation and globalisation. There is a widespread worry that
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, a survey conducted by Oxford University revealed that the chances of students suffering from depression may increase due to the differences in the cultures and it should be taken seriously by the governments.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...