Write about the following topic: Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are several ways of learning. Some experts suggest that

students

can learn from

home

by using technology

such

as

internet

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or television programs as a tool of learning. Others argue that it will not as effective as attending the classes at school. Personally, I totally agree that studying at

home

can bring the appropriate results because they can freely choose whatever and whenever they want to study.

Home

school learning programs are created based on

student's

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and abilities. It can be adapted from whatever

students

are interested

.

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The process of learning can be advanced and have multiple sources from online programs which can enlighten

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each

of

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student while attending the

class

the

students

cannot be chosen whatever they want and how they can learn.

In addition

,

studying

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at

home

, learners can spend unlimited time on learning. There is no specific time of starting or ending. They can take a break whenever they feel exhausted or lack

of

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concentration.

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if

students

do not understand

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some topics, they can immediately stop the online program and rerun that part to teach them again while attending the

class

can not. So,

this

method

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them to get better result of learning than attending the

class

. In conclusion, even taking time in

class

can create a chance for learning by face to face communication between

students

and teachers, learning at

home

can bring

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equal effective benefits. Being chosen what and when to learn,

students

can lead to the perfect outcome.