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Some students choose to study in another country for a time during high school or university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

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In recent days, the perspection about
studies
 has changed. Some pupils prefer to continue their
studies
 abroad due to various reasons.
This
 essay will discuss the merits and demerits of
this
 scenario. On the one hand, there are plenty of reasons, why scholars
chooses
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 international counties to pursue
education
.
Firstly
, it would give them an opportunity to interact with different
students
 from different cultures so they can be adapted attractive behaviours in their life
also
.
For example
,one of the western countries welcome pupils from different nations
thus
students
 gathered in a particular place and get a chance to know about their culture as well as languages;
moreover
 while studying abroad they could learn multi-languages and become
a
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bilingual.
Besides
 that,
education
 in another
country
 assist scholer to become an independent person
hence
 they will acquire the ability to build own decisions in their life. To prove that, many countries provide the opportunities to do part-time jobs while taking
education
 because
that
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students
 don't want to rely on progenitors to meet their expenses.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that the disadvantages of complete
studies
from
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abroad. One of the pervasive cons is
financial
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 burden. It will require a huge amount of fees to pursue an
education
 in another
country
 so it is not possible
to
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 every student to complete
education
international
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internationally
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. For evidence, a
middle class
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 student could not afford the tuition fee for complete
studies
 abroad so he would be forced to take loans from banks,
consequently
, it will create a tremendous financial burden to the whole family.
Furthermore
, while studying another
country
 scholars should be shifted from family
hence
 the freedom give them a chance to fell into bad friendship, which
affect
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 their
studies
 as well as their future. To conclude
that
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, while choosing
education
 in another
country
students
 should be aware of the pros and cons of international
studies
.
Although
, it will use
to
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 the
students
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student's
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 career, some hidden problems
also
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 there. It is predicting that pupils should take counselling classes from experienced persons before choosing their careers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exposure
  • Diverse cultures
  • Global awareness
  • Improves language skills
  • Enhances employment prospects
  • Develops independence
  • Self-reliance
  • Homesickness
  • Cultural shock
  • High costs
  • Tuition
  • Living expenses
  • Educational systems
  • Styles of teaching
  • Isolated
  • Disconnected
  • Reintegrating
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