In many countries recently young single people have been living far from their parents from the time they began studies or work and until they married,do you think there are more advatanges or disadavantages to this trend?

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start working or studying in institution’s of higher learning they separate themselves from their guardians till they get hitched ,

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will explore both the advantages and disadvantages Young unaccompanied people have moved out of their

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houses and started living

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their own

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not only brings out personal responsibility in them but

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growth and maturity,a person at 18years of age who decides to stay afar from

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growth is

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,maturity will be easily manifested in

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individual

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contributing to independency.Another advantage is that

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individual is in a position to plan their life early enough.

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,if he or she is working they will learn to work with a budget

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planning for necessities and not wants impulse buying will rarely occur in

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persons

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accounts because they are keen on the necessities.

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,there are disadvantages to

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as well whereby unwedded young man or woman will consider

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as a way of acquiring freedom and is entitled to do whatever it is they have ever wished to do without a

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eye keeping watch over them,most of

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human beings lead life’s that are so crooked engaging in illegal activities just to earn extra coin to sustain their crooked lifestyle.

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,what is happening in

ourinstitution’s

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of higher learning ladies have sunk deep into prostitution and men in drugs and other inappropriate behaviour in the name of freedom . In conclusion,whippersnappers will be required to be under

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parents

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watch till they attain a certain age

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25 years at

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age one is sober in making decisions and they know how they want their life to turn out in the near future.

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

287 words

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In many countries recently young single people have been living far from their parents from the time they began studies or work and until they married,do you think there are more advatanges or disadavantages to this trend?

Fully explain your ideas

Should Children be encouraged to be competitive in sports and other activities? Or is it better for them to learn the benefits of co-operating with other people? Discuss both these views and give your own answer.

Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in cities.what are the reasons? Do advantages of their developmenth outweigt it's disadvantages

Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that school children should study history as a main subject. Others think that others subject are more important for children in modern society. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.