It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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the backbone of the country, and it is essential to let them know if they doing

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bad

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, it is

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and teacher duty to teach their

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the difference.

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, there are many ways to let youngsters learn the difference between

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good

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and

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bad

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but the punishment should not include, in order to make

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realize which one is a bad habit.

To begin

with, humans always make a mistake even adults, elders or

children

. But especially for

children

, if parents or teachers use punishment, it is

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that

kids

will obey their lesson for the

first

time.

However

, it will cause youngling to have less

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and make more problem in the future. According to the research, many

kids

that have been punished are more likely

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up as violent

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more than the other. In

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, For those parents and teachers who use the punishment, the

children

will have a bad memory about their adults or

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worst case the kid hates their parent or teacher.

Lastly

, if

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and

teacher

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cannot teach them, it will be a hard situation once there are no more people who can teach the kid. And it will trigger many serious problems in societies

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as the

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chaos in the societies. In summary, I can't entirely agree with

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statement, according to the former and latter

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that had been discussed.

Instead

of

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kids

when they make a mistake, parents and teachers should talk to them with reason, it is one of the ways that I suggest adults

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teach the kid.

This

way will make more

kids

learn precisely more than

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them.

Also

,

this

way will make them

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be a reasonable person once they become

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.