The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in the complex
world
, every
countries
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have their own national governments who have authority to take responsibility of ruling their own nations within their territories. Some experts suggest that the whole
world
should be ruled by only
one
government
. Before taking
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comparison of both benefits and drawbacks is necessary. Having
one
government
for the whole
world
can lead to
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leap forward
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because all nations will become
one
. All policies, laws and regulations should
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in order to achieve the same destination. Every
countries
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will do whatever they can to reach that goal.
For instance
, if the
government
has a policy about developing
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technology, every
countries
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will coordinate with each other to improve their abilities. Ruling under
single
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government
, each country can use the idea that originated by other
countries
for
further
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. It will save time and energy resources.
Moreover
, any conflicts of laws relating to the difference of boundary can be automatically removed.
However
, if the whole
world
have only
one
government
, the diversity of
countries
in the
world
will be demolished. All cultures, language, foods which managed by the same organization will turn into the same.
Therefore
, people will no longer enjoy
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in various
countries
because there
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no more interesting things to be discovered.
In addition
, some problems need to be solved by variety
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and the
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that no
one
knows
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one
knows how to solve their problems better
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their own nation cannot be replaced. Having considered
this
matter carefully, even though the whole
world
can be ruled by
single
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government
, the diversity of
government
should be applied.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • centralized policies
  • international cooperation
  • global economy
  • trade barriers
  • military spending
  • authoritarian control
  • cultural diversity
  • national identities
  • local issues
  • homogenized
  • decision-making
  • democratic representation
  • world peacekeeping force
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