Childhood obesity is a growing public health crisis. In your opinion, what are the reasons for this and what can be done to tackle this issue?
Now, it is seen that children`s issue connected with overweight is
raising
day by day. The probable cause for the problem is fast Correct your spelling
rising
food
restaurants and possible ways to rectify this
will be keeping the
healthy lifestyle.
Currently, junk Correct article usage
a
food
restaurants are staying too popular among many people and children of course are Correct your spelling
no
not
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exception
. Because of eating junk and Add an article
an exception
the exception
also
fat food
and consuming an abundance of sugar that soda and candies contain children are facing this
unpleasant outcome. For instance
, according to
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the
research that recently has been accomplished by Chinese Correct article usage
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scientist
from AE company illustrated that even only 1 slice of pizza that looks like a light snack at the Fix the agreement mistake
scientists
first
blush contains 32 types of unsaturated fats and virtually 220 calories. Also
it is proved that sugars from candies and soda are not common ones like glucose and fructose, they are actually strong sugars as same as galactose that easily break up Add a comma
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its
structure to become fat in our organisms.
Every issue has its solution, and in Correct pronoun usage
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case
for preventing and tackling Add a comma
,case
obesity
it is more suitable to keep healthy
lifestyle. Usually, Add an article
a healthy
obesity
arises when extra calories from food
and unhealthy ration aren`t consumed or burnt so these calories in this
situation become fat in organism
. Engaging in Add an article
the organism
an organism
sport
and keeping healthy ration
as well utilize Correct your spelling
ratio
this
fat and rectify the overweight. As an example
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obesity
. Approximately 2 years ago he had same
problem, he suffered from fatness Change the article
the same
then
by recommendation of doctors of our local medical center
he commenced to do Change the spelling
centre
sport
. After sometime
he could lose weight and keep fit as well. From his words Replace the word
some time
sport
is dominant
factor in solving issues connected with extra weight.
To conclude, we have found that nowadays Add an article
the dominant
a dominant
dominant
cause for Correct article usage
the dominant
obesity
across children is fast food
restaurants and reliable ways for solving the issue is keeping the sport
and healthy lifestyle. Obesity
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