It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
In contemporary life, the reduction of population in developed countries is considered as the consequence of the low rate of marriages. There has been an increasing idea that it is better for people under the age of 30 to marry which brings benefits to personal life and society. In my perspective, I strongly agree with the statement and the essay will explain the major reasons and provide relevant examples.
On the one hand, establishing a family before 30 years old is reasonable.
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definitely the golden time for giving birth; according to scientific researches, several experiments show the elder of women have pregnant the higher proportion of down syndrome for their offsprings. Indeed, having a family in Linking Words
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age group would raise the desire to mature and develop their careers in order to be the best pattern for their children. Linking Words
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, those responsible people will try their best to enhance their living standards which significantly boost the movement of the whole country.
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, the family pressure is undeniable for young adults in certain features. In modern life, ambitious youngsters usually dream to pursue achievements in their passions. Linking Words
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, those dreams might stop for a long period of time after the wedding, especially with females who have to sacrifice their ambition and fall to take a noble responsibility as mothers. In terms of breadwinners, the financial problem is a huge issue with a new nuclear family without reliable supports for relatives. Luckily, the governments lay a hand to support Linking Words
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In conclusion, the advantages of getting married before 30 years old are appealing including the maturity of attitude and supporting the country's development. Linking Words
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, the sacrifice is considerable which needs to gain the attention of extended family and society.Linking Words
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