You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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letter to enquire about the accommodation during my studies at "Oxford University London" which is going to start next year summer. Since my course is going to start

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next summer, I was interested in staying at the college hall of residence which is located near to the college. My preference would be a separate room with a study table to concentrate on my academics.

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, I am fine with sharing the living room with other students. As an International from India, I would mostly prefer Asian cuisine, especially for the breakfast and dinner that consists of rice, wheat and some leafy vegetables.

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, I would be happy to try the local dishes only at the weekend or on holidays. I understand that the college's residence will be in high demand next year. If unfortunately, everything is occupied by that time any residence within the walkable from the university would be suitable for me. I hope that the university's management considers

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request and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Badaruddin Wasef

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Coherence & Cohesion

While your letter is well-structured, make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea with a clear transition to the next.

Task Achievement

Include more details about the possible alternatives to better demonstrate your flexibility.

Task Achievement

You have addressed all the required points in the task - accommodation, food needs, and alternatives.

Coherence & Cohesion

Your greeting and closing are both appropriate and polite, showing a suitable writing tone for the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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