Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Many supermarkets nowadays are selling more imported
products
instead
of domestic products
. The reasons
for this
tendency will be mentioned in this
essay and I believe that this
is a negative development.
There are various reasons
why many supermarkets are selling more imported products
from other nations. Firstly
, imported products
may have a higher quality compared with goods that are locally sourced. In other words
, some processed food produced in other countries may have a higher quality due to
their advanced technology in manufacturing. Furthermore
, some renowned products
such
as Coca-Cola or Pepsi would be easier to buy since it is cheaper as well as
their reputation. Thus
, buying imported products
may increase their profit in general.
However
, this
development could be negative for many reasons
. Firstly
, local businesses would have fewer consumers which affects negatively their income and ability to reinvest in production, as a result
of the financial problems of small domestic businesses. Furthermore
, the nation's economy would be more dependent on other countries since they accounted for a large segment of selling products
. This
could impact an individual's patriotism since they use more and more imported products
that may be easier to be affected by other cultures. For example
, the young generation in Vietnam preferred to buy Coca-Cola instead
of Xa xi (a local soft drink in Vietnam) since they believed that it could be better in quality.
In conclusion, there are several mentioned reasons
why many supermarkets have this
tendency, however
, it is undeniable that selling more and more products
that are imported from other countries would be a negative development due to
several mentioned clues.Submitted by jakedth162 on
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