More people will work from home and more student will study at home if computer technology becomes cheap and accessible. What will be the advantage and disadvantage if this happen?

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There is no denying that a lot of people will work from
home
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and most
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student
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students
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will learn at
home
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due to computer components and
technology
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become cheaper and accessible.
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essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand, there
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an increasing number of workers to work from
home
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in order to reduce
time wasting
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and travel expenses. A
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example is Coursera academy, which is an online learning platform based on the internet,
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, the instructors or workers will create the teaching materials from
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, the students will
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study at
home
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at any time.
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, the internet
technology
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is provided to people's
home
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and can communicate to each
others
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.
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, working from
home
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will be the benefits in terms of reducing
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physical
wasting and
technology
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advancing.
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, working from
home
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suffer from several
problem
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problems
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such
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as it could be some error the concept of working details.
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, the communication problem has
occured
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occurred
while lecturers are online teaching.
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, most students could not understand the real concept when they need to ask some
queations
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questions
or when they need to consult
immediatly
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immediately
. So,
internet
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the internet
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unstable is one cause to make the workers or many students
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occured
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occurred
some problem. In conclusion, it is clearly seen that
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both
working
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from
home
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and study at
home
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have
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some advantages in terms of reducing time working and reduced fare, communication
technology
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will
also
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improving as well for providing to people in the future.
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