You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Now you want to write to your friend about the place. Write a letter to a friend about the place. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,

Hello Dave, Hope you’re doing well and my letter finds you in
a
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radiant health.
Its
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been a long time since we have met each other.I am writing to inform you that recently I went to visit
famous
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monument
Taj Mahal
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in the Agra and it was
breathtaking
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experience as the beauty of
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palace which
is entirely build
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of white marble was marvellous. I highly recommend that whenever get time ,you should plan
this
trip with me.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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