A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.- Describe your point of view. - Say what you like about the show and why. - Ask the newspaper to take some action.

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Hello sir, I am writing
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letter to express my dissatisfaction with a reporter who complained regarding a new program on the Sony channel as it presented that content of the show ,Fear Factor was not suitable for geriatrics and children below 10 years as stunts performed in one of the episodes was quite risky if any of the kids perform they could put their life in the risk.In my viewpoint,if possible the show timings should be changed
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of banning . Let me explain the situation to you as I am having a keen interest in adventure sports so
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show fascinates me a lot. I want that your newspaper should take some action as it’s a basic right of every citizen to perform and view whatever they like .
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,implications should be taken into consideration as a lot of
budget
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budgets
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is spent on the making of
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shows. Hoping to
listen
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a favourable response from your side. Yours faithfully, Dave.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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