- Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

computers

are considered to be

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vital

for school teaching

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process

,in my

opinion

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I believe that

this

statement is true because technology has become an important aspect in every

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life and we should try to use

this

for more

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useful

ways

than the

ways

its been used for. there is a general agreement that the new generation is very involved with modern technology,

therefore

using

computers

in the learning process will

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certainly

draw the attention of the

students

to their lessons which will

then

make the teaching methods more

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efficient

,

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computers

can open a

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variety

of

ways

to teach a lesson, like showing the

students

videos of the topic they are learning about and teaching them how to do

reaserches

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researches

on the internet using the

computers

. another angle on

this

debate suggests that using

computers

in learning at

schools

can put

schools

in the problem of needing to find funds to buy the devices because

computers

can be really expensive , to a certain extent they are right, but I believe that

schools

must always make sure that they are doing their best to give their

students

the best learning

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experience

there is no matter what the coasts are. in conclusion,

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think that

computers

must be used in

schools

and the most important reason for

that is

to give the

students

the

informations

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information

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they need in their school stage

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the most modern

ways

and in

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attracting

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way, if school

students

were taught right ,the whole

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society

would be rightfully educated