Task 01: Pie Chart The charts below show the differences in how people in 3 countries learned English in 2010 and 2015.
The pie chart provides data on the percentages of individuals who learned
English
in three different countries in 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, it is clear that
there is a decline in the percentages
of people who learned Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
English
in evening classes in 2015 compared to 2010, considering the three countries. In contrast
, the percentage
of English
learning students preferring online lectures showed a significant increase, in general. Moreover
, no one went abroad to learn English
in 2010 in country
C.
In terms of evening classes, the percentages dropped from %70 to
%Change preposition
apply
67
, %70 to %48 and %94Change preposition
to 67
to
%Change preposition
apply
82
respectively for Change preposition
to 82
Country
A, Country
B and Country
C. As the numbers indicate, the sharpest decline was seen in Country
B. Moreover
, the percentage
of learners going abroad to learn English
showed a slight decrease in 2015, compared to 2010 in Country
A.
On the other hand
, demand
for online lectures rose for all three countries. Correct article usage
the demand
That is
, the percentage
of online education was %5 for Country
A in 2010, which doubled to %10 in 2015. Furthermore
, it increased from %6 to %15 in Country
C. The most significant rise is seen in Country
B with the percentage
showing a fourfold increase from %8 to %32.Submitted by ilkem.emeksiz on
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