The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Utilizing public funds to preserve and maintain the historic structures is considered a huge burden on government treasure, which should be directed towards developing infrastructure facilities for the citizens. I strongly condemn the above statement, as these buildings represent our culture and contribute to the economy as well.
Firstly
, we will discuss the importance of ancient structures for a country and secondly
, we will talk about the monetary benefits of preserving them.Submitted by jatinkochar1993 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite