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Nowadays, media and marketing have become a part of our daily life that play a role in affecting human shopping habits and decisions.
Although
advertising aimed at children
is more and more popular in the world, it is argued that those advertisements should be banned. In my opinion, I strongly support this
view and my reasons will be explained in the next
paragraph.
Firstly
, Children
are the objects that advertisements can adversely dominate their interests as well as their behaviors
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behaviours
Although
some products
advertised positively affect children
, those products
often do not bring as huge profits as unhealthy and harmful products
like fast food, plastic toys. Therefore
, companies manufacturing products
for children
choose to invest a large amount of money for these ads because they are economically efficient. The attractive and vivid advertisements with a dense number of appearances interrupting movies and songs will make children
unconsciously watch them then
become attracted. This
leads to the kids having impulsive desires to eat or play something. In addition
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children
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childrens
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children
such
as fried food, sweets, which make eating habits disordered and directly impact on
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children
.
Secondly
, families' financial crises are also
a result of advertising aimed at children
. The kids will find ways to demand their parents
to buy items they want like screaming, crying or even violent acts. As a consequence, their parents
are forced to complete their wishes so they don't have to meet those problems anymore. Some parents
have to take loans from other people to afford those things and eventually face a crucial crisis.
In conclusion, it is believed that commercial advertising has adverse effects on the child's habits and can be the reasons
for being in debt for a number of Fix the agreement mistake
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parents
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