As well as making money, the business should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

Myriads of social researchers consider that social activities have many merits rather than demerits to the association and the business area should make money and social responsibilities as well. I am inclined to believe that if the business community interact with society and follow social plans it will be helpful to both sides.
Firstly
, many international business communities have social responsibilities due to
this
superb opportunity to improve their reputation on the market.
Also
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the government has released statements about supporting communities who will follow social plans and provide their many benefits since 2015. Nowadays directors around the country have hired 250 special consultants working with social areas and knowing the lasting trends. As practice shows, the population will trust more to open companies that always show reports, posts on social media.
Secondly
, regarding the government's
statements
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many companies allocate budgets to social areas
such
as sport and media.
For example
: Beeline company runs a charity marathon in the head city annually, KazTransOil company makes many reports about pollution reduction by improving their equipment and invites many volunteers to show the result of the work. I am convinced
this
open way will help many of them and improve their condition on the market In a nutshell, according to many social reports and
surveys
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way allows them to be clone-knit with the population and having some social responsibilities have many pros rather than cons. Hiring special consultants have influenced favourably and allowed many companies to improve their results on the international market.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social responsibilities
  • contribute
  • well-being
  • community
  • philanthropy
  • sustainability
  • ethical
  • trust
  • reputation
  • accountable
  • profit-making
  • balance
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