Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?
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we will prevent the problem. Here's an example from real life. My little brother watched a lot of YouTube on his smart TV. We did not control him in any way and did not monitor what he watched. One day I noticed that he behaves strangely, speaks incomprehensible enemies, communicates little and wants to watch more TV. Once I noticed that he was watching terrible monsters on YouTube and he liked it. It was just a disgusting monster called lilac-headed and he definitely puzzled my brother's brain. From that day on, I forbade him to watch the video with lilac-heads and followed him and in the end
it led to good results.
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