Some people say that countryside is a better option for building new homes, others say that it is not true. To what extent do you agree to this statement?

Some people would argue that the

land

in

countryside

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should not be consumed for

construction

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the construction

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of new houses, whereas others would argue that

countryside

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is a better option for living. I am in favour of the

first

argument. There are a

lot

of factors that

supports

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the idea of avoiding

construction

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the construction

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of new houses in

the

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rural areas.

Firstly

, the

land

of

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countryside

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the countryside

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is ideal for agricultural use. If a

lot

of

this

land

is consumed for residential purposes, it will ultimately lead to

depletion

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the depletion

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of various food items,

for example

, wheat, rice and corn etc.

Decreased

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The decreased

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yield of

such

crops overburdens the government for importing these

good

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from the neighbouring countries and

hence

, the overall financial status of the country is affected.

Secondly

, deforestation and destruction of greenery for building new homes increases air, water and noise pollution, and

hence

causes unpredictable climate changes,

for

example

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storms and

land

-sliding etc. To illustrate

this

, a

lot

of underdeveloped and developing countries,

for

example

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Africa and some Asian countries are facing the intense challenges of feminine and starvation, leading to compromised health and an increase in mortality and morbidity ratio in these regions.

However

, a

lot

of people

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that the rural environment is

more

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healthier, clean and spacious. Children have more space available for outdoor activities in

countryside

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the countryside

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and the environment is more peaceful as compared to urban areas.

Although

, it is true

but

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overcrowding the rural

land

will ultimately make it more polluted, noisy and unsafe for the local residents and immigrants. In conclusion, while some people

belief

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that the

countryside

is a better place for living a healthy and beautiful life due to its clean environment, I am of the opinion that the natural beauty and purity of the

countryside

should be preserved and

this

land

should only be utilised for cultivation of crops. The greenery should be rather increased for controlling pollution and the global warming