Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

Many
people
believe that
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penalty is necessary to keep
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system efficient in
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society. While there are some negative aspects of capital
punishment
, I agree with the view that without it we will become more vulnerable to violence.
Death
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penalty can be considered unsuitable
punishment
for several reasons. The strongest argument is that we have no
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to kill other humans.
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to live is the basic right of any human being, and no one can infringe
this
right, irrespective of the person’s deeds.
Moreover
, innocent
people
can face wrongful execution.
Such
unfair sentences take away
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of innocent
people
and make other citizens lose faith in law and justice. And
besides
, sometimes criminals repent of their acts. In
this
case
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they should be given a
second
chance to improve themselves.
However
, I believe that capital
punishment
is necessary
in
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society.
Firstly
, it is an effective deterrent
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major crimes. The best method to prevent a person from committing
crime
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a crime
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is to show the consequences of his or her actions.
For example
, the government of Pakistan has controlled the rate of terrorism by enforcing death penalties for the members of terrorist organisations.
Secondly
, the governments spend large sums of
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budget on
maintenance
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of prisoners.
Instead
,
this
money can be used for the development of the society and welfare of the
people
. To sum up,
although
capital
punishment
has some disadvantages, I think that it proves to be the best way of controlling criminals, lessening governmental expenses and preventing other
people
from doing crimes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Advocates
  • Capital punishment
  • Contemporary society
  • Violent crimes
  • Deterrence
  • Retribution
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Imprisonment
  • Innocent
  • Unethical
  • Inhumane
  • Misuse
  • Legal systems
  • Heinous crimes
  • Closure
  • Moral concerns
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