When a country develops its technology, traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Technology
is an important thing in people’s life
and it clearly helps us to adapt Replace the word
lives
with
the period of development. I disagree with the opinion that, when Change preposition
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technology
develops in a country, the traditional skills
disappear. There are two reasons that I will describe related to this
case; traditional skills
can combine with technology
and traditional skills
still have a great position in technological development.
On the one hand, traditional skill is the heritage from our ancestors. So we have responsibilities to take care of it. The development of technology
has huge advantages for ‘traditional skills
’. Using the technology
we can improve these skills
and while trying to introduce new innovations to combine technology
and traditional skills
. For instance
, ‘hand art painting’ is one of the traditional skills
, people can make a new creation by using technology
that uses ‘Photoshop’. The combination between hand art painting and Photoshop software will be a great innovation. People can create great works and earn a lot by doing this
.
On another hand, although
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technology
is developing sharply, the
traditional skill used products are still having a high position in the marketing field. Correct article usage
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For example
, Indonesian traditional stuff namely ‘Songket’ is still creating great improvement in the sale. In my friend hometown, an industrial Songket factory, at the end of 2014, received orders for 2000 to 3000 pieces of 'songket’
stuff from some countries including the USA, Italy, Japan and Vietnam. It proves that traditional products still stand up till now.
To sum up, traditional Correct your spelling
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skills
are still alive though technology
has increased dramatically. It still has a special place in people’s lives. Also
, traditional skills
’ popularity will increase if people try to combine both traditional skills
and technology
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