When a country develops its technology, traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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is an important thing in people’s
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and it clearly helps us to adapt
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the period of development. I disagree with the opinion that, when
technology
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develops in a country, the traditional
skills
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disappear. There are two reasons that I will describe related to
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case; traditional
skills
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can combine with
technology
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and traditional
skills
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still have a great position in technological development. On the one hand, traditional skill is the heritage from our ancestors. So we have responsibilities to take care of it. The development of
technology
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has huge advantages for ‘traditional
skills
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’. Using the
technology
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we can improve these
skills
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and while trying to introduce new innovations to combine
technology
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and traditional
skills
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.
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, ‘hand art painting’ is one of the traditional
skills
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, people can make a new creation by using
technology
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that uses ‘Photoshop’. The combination between hand art painting and Photoshop software will be a great innovation. People can create great works and earn a lot by doing
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. On another hand,
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technology
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is developing sharply,
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traditional skill used products are still having a high position in the marketing field.
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, Indonesian traditional stuff namely ‘Songket’ is still creating great improvement in the sale. In my friend hometown, an industrial Songket factory, at the end of 2014, received orders for 2000 to 3000 pieces of '
songket’
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socket
stuff from some countries including the USA, Italy, Japan and Vietnam. It proves that traditional products still stand up till now. To sum up, traditional
skills
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are still alive though
technology
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has increased dramatically. It still has a special place in people’s lives.
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, traditional
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’ popularity will increase if people try to combine both traditional
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technology
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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