Some people think international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution,others think there are some other ways . Discuss both views and give your own opinion .

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There is no doubt that air pollution is the most pressing crisis plaguing our planet, and if no action is taken immediately we will find ourselves in a very dire situation. Some people believe that an international
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day can help to reverse
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process, whilst others are against
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idea. In
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essay, we shall look at both sides of
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coin.
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and foremost, increasing international
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days will create a change in the transportation sector. Many people will have to take alternate mediums of
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. They will be encouraged to carpool, use public
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and even in the case of short-distance travel, walk or use a
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.
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, in many developing countries there is still no guarantee for
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, in my hometown Trivandrum, the price is currently INR. 104/- per litre, and keeps rising every week. Considering, that travel by car and bike is the easiest mode of transportation because of the distance between the different requirements in the city, and the lack of a reliable public
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system, individuals are still forced to rely on their cars to move from place to place. So the introduction of a
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day will only disrupt citizens' lives Alternately, what the government needs to do, is to strengthen the public
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sectors, impose heavy fines on the number of
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a family can posse, and
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, they must thrust onto the public fines for using
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after a certain hour.
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, they should encourage local
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businesses, by creating more
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lanes and parks, which will in turn help to boost their business.
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, the ministry must impose benefits to
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users so as to promote
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practice. Car manufacturers, must look into the possibility of producing greener cars, and slowly phase out the production of petrol and diesel
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. Once
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happens, more and more petrol stations will cater to the new requirements by vehicle owners. These are some of the changes that the administration can enforce. In conclusion, I feel the introduction of
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days will not really affect the overall problem,
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, more must be done to try to discourage users from choosing to use their
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and
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opt for more greener forms for
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