Every year several langauges die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Over the
last
two or three decades, many linguistics have died due to advanced technology and
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revolution.
However
, some think that
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matter
becuase
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because
only
minimum
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common
language
can be easier to
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around the
world
. In
this
essay, I strongly agree with
this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, there are many benefits for having a few
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among
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the
world
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Firstly
, people can easily communicate to
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others
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parts of the
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when has few linguistics are available like
English
as
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international dialect,
as a result
,
language
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barrier cannot happen and everyone might be
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around the planet.
For instance
, many OTT platforms have been releasing
any
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other countries movies
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globally because they are added to
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in common
diallect
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dialect
such
as
English
,
thus
, everyone has a chance to watch any other
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nations
bastions
movies.
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these have happened only for
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linguistics are roaming around the
world
.
Secondly
,
this
can reduce
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level
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the international students when has a minimum
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is available. What I mean by
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,
language
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barrier is
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vital problem for the abroad students where they do not
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familiar
with the local
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popular countries
such
as Japan. Taking Japan,
for example
, Sony companies is a top-most
companies
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among the
world
,
this
product
also
popular widely, even though,
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CEO cannot speak an international
language
,
hence
, whenever they
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any new product while they will need
a
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English
translator. The
world
has a few slang, nobody feels
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and will be stress level.
Hence
,
common
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language
is the best for nowadays. To conclude,
this
essay argued that every year some
language
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been died
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, I think
this
is not a big issue because every nation
accept
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the
world
common
language
as
a
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English
,
this
is a good improvement
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among
the global. In my opinion, about
this
, when people use more universal
language
while they might be lived a better
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as well as will gain more wisdom through
this
.
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