Both governments and individuals are spending vast amounts of money protecting animals and their habitat. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and health care.To what extent do you agree?

Many people, including official

organizations

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have been taking steps to restore

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wildlife

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wild life

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wildlife

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. They are not

hasitating

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hesitating

to spend

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huge amount of money

into

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it. Whereas other believe that, if that money will use in the welfare of the society

then

there could be a better outcome. I do not agree with the latter view, as

animals

have the same right of survival as

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.

To begin

with, every living being is a part of a

food

chain,

that is

a fundamental system of life and in the absence of any living being from the

food

chain

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it could be an outcome of

disasterous

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disastrous

for each of us. To illustrate it,

honey

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the honey

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bee is a tiny insect, but not only it plays a vital role to balance the

food

chain,

it is

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but it is also

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qually

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equally

important for pollination. If there

is

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no bees

then

there is no

friuts

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fruits

fruit

and vegetables.

Moreover

,

animals

are connected to our meal whether directly or indirectly. Dairy products, vegetables, meat and various other

food

items are dependent on several

animals

. To maintain

ecologycal

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ecological

balance we must protect them.

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Furthermore

,

animals

are suffering the adverse effect of climate change due to human actions.

Gobal

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Global

warning

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is a quite famous term nowadays, as it has been turning into a gigantic issue for all

organism

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organisms

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. Beyond

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disruption

distruption

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the distruption

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of

animals

habitat

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habitats

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,

golbal

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global

warming

also

shifts the cyclical events in

lives

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the lives

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of

animals

. It is heart-wrenching to see

animals

in

a

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apply

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circumtances

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circumstances

circumstance

where they are about to extinct.

Additionally

, as we can see the massive influx in population, we are destroying

forest

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forests

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to

settled

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down our people. No doubt that

this

forest is a home of numerous species, if

human

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a human

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is responsible for

this

then

, one ought to provide them shelter too. In the conclusion, I wholeheartedly support the restoration of

animals

as they are

also

a part of

this

world, they are equally important for our survival.