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Increasing numbers of students are going to university instead of working after high school. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who do this.

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It is a well-knowing fact that more and more young
people
 tend to get a high
education
 rather than go to work. Obviously, there are pros and cons
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this
 trend. The main thing that needs to be said is that university gives
the
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 diverse range of possibilities to young men after graduation.
Firstly
, students get a diploma, which means, they get the theoretical knowledge of the future profession and they are ready to become specialists in
diffrent
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different
 fields.
Secondly
, it is a
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 fact that the majority of
people
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higher
education
 are better paid than
people
 who didn't
graduated
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 from
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universities. And
finally
,
education
 gives
people
 the chance to get
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intellectual and sophisticated work. No one can be a
lawer
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lawyer
 or a medicine worker without basic educational background.
On the other hand
, we can observe that there are
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 some
disadvatages
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disadvantages
 of enrolling
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 universities after high school.
To begin
 with, if kids already know what kind of job they want to do and if doing
this
 job they don't need a diploma,
then
 why should they spend time on
education
, when they can already go working.
Next
, working means freedom via
recieving
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receiving
 money from the
emploers
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employers
 and it's almost impossible to work full day during the educational process.
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, sometimes a diploma is insufficient for some companies, they are looking for
the
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expierenced
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experienced
 employees. To sum up,
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 there are some strong and weak points of going to university and students have to decide what is important for them, what is their attitude to all these reasons.
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