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In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?

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We cannot deny that economic
growth
 is of significant importance to indicate the quality of
people
’s
life
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 in all
countries
. Recently, the
growth
 of global economics influences an increase in the number of the richer, both in developed and developing
countries
.
Nevertheless
, their mental health is not as good as expected when comparing
in
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 the past. A primary factor is
the
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 fact that those have
such
 more pressures from their
work
 that they neglect to develop their personal emotions themselves
such
 as
happiness
, while they concentrate on how to gain more money or salaries each day. Most
people
 in developed
countries
 seem to lack
willingness
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 to make themselves happier as they try to make them become
the
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richer;
therefore
, individuals nowadays seem to be less happy. Recently, many growing companies have dealt with
a
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plenty of
work
 owing to worldwide economic
growth
.
In other words
, the more
people
 become richer, the more demands they have.
This
 leads to the increasing amount of
work
 in most of the companies.
Consequently
, workers,
also
 representing normal
people
, have had a lot of stress from their
work
. Their stress can reduce their
happiness
 level which has unsatisfied effects on the overall
happiness
 of a whole country.
Furthermore
, understanding a key reason making
people
 seem less happy is one of many results obtaining from
this
situation
.
This
 helps design a way of improving a current
situation
. In conclusion, the recent
growth
 of global economics affects current
people
’s
happiness
 in developed
countries
 which do not seem to be as same happy as in the past.
However
, what
people
 learn from
this
situation
 is a major reason why
this
situation
 occurs. It leads to the way
of
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government management playing a crucial role in the development of overall individual
happiness
.
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