In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Famine is becoming increasingly serious in many nations.

Although

agricultural science has developed yet everyday people all over the world continue to suffer and even die from hunger.

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essay looks at some of the problems caused by food scarcity and suggests some solutions to the problems. Despite agricultural advancements, the problem of food shortage is increasing

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all over the world. One of the main causes of the problem is unevenly distributed resources.

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to say, it is known that most people who suffer from hunger are from undeveloped

countries

where they have no financial support to conduct researches in farming. Another effect is that

climate

change

and geographical differences aggravate

this

problem.

For instance

, adequate rain, sunshine and nourished soil are the essential requirements for growing crops but they barely exist in some

countries

in Africa.

On the other hand

, even though the certain country has a rich harvest of crops,

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to be destroyed by flooding or other natural disasters which might be caused by

climate

change

However

, there are many solutions that can be implemented to overcome

this

issue. To tackle

this

issue, developed

countries

can aid poor

countries

by sharing their technology and financial resources so that those

countries

can conduct research to find solutions to solve the famine.

Secondly

, it is essential to tackle

climate

change

with immediate effect.

Otherwise

, it will impact the whole world in a negative way. In conclusion, the famine is due to the reasons

such

as being in

the

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undeveloped

countries

, the impact of

climate

change

or geographical differences.

This

is a serious issue, and the best approach to deal with providing the knowledge and financial support for people who need it the most.

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Topic Vocabulary:

inequality
distribution
access to resources
climate change
natural disasters
political factors
economic factors
agricultural practices
infrastructure
transportation
population growth
education
knowledge
food waste

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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