Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The word in doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun danger in your sentence. Consider removing it.
The noun phrase main part seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that claim may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It appears that you are missing a comma or two with the interrupter however. Consider adding the comma(s).
It appears that the phrase whole world does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
The spelling of favor is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
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