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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Lately
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 sun
energy
 is in demand in a number of homes across the globe.
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 essay will explore
tha
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the
 advantages and disadvantages and give a conclusion.
To begin
 with,the sun is a powerful source of
energy
 and it's beneficial to the environment. Solar panels have been introduced as one method of transmitting
energy
thus
 transforming solar
power
as
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 a source of clean
energy
.Solar radiation is renewable and is available all
the
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it can never run out unlike other forms of
power
.
For instance
 introduction of solar
panels
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,
this
 technology has been improved over the years
hence
 transforming solar
energy
 into a renewable form of
power
.
On the other hand
,
hydro-electricity
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 does not come in
cheap
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 considering
purchase
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 of materials for installation
this
 will cost an arm and a leg ,another problem is it is weather dependent solar panels are dependent on sunlight to effectively gather
power
,
thus
 rainy season will have an effect on
energy
 productivity.
For
instance
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 at night solar is not available and alternative methods are to be devised. In
conclusion
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 renewable source of
power
 is expensive and inefficient but is safe for the environment. Economies of the world should consider transitioning to
this
 form of
energy
 .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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