Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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is in demand in a number of homes across the globe.
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with,the sun is a powerful source of
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and it's beneficial to the environment. Solar panels have been introduced as one method of transmitting
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transforming solar
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a source of clean
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.Solar radiation is renewable and is available all
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it can never run out unlike other forms of
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introduction of solar
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technology has been improved over the years
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into a renewable form of
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does not come in
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of materials for installation
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will cost an arm and a leg ,another problem is it is weather dependent solar panels are dependent on sunlight to effectively gather
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rainy season will have an effect on
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productivity.
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at night solar is not available and alternative methods are to be devised. In
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renewable source of
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is expensive and inefficient but is safe for the environment. Economies of the world should consider transitioning to
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form of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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