Some people trust their first impressions about a person’s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person’s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong

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think that
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somebody is the most correct.
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disagree and believe that early impact is regularly incorrect . From my everyday experiences and observations, I can stand that the early impact of
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somebody is extremely repeatedly incorrect. In the following paragraphs, I will list my reasons to support my answer.
First
of all , when people meet for the
first
time they often do not have time to get to know each other or even have a conversation. So , sometimes all they remember is how they looked. Personally , I often
myself
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judge a
person
by his or her external appearance. Fortunately , I many times made sure of the incorrectness of my judgments.
For example
, when I met my future husband for the
first
time he made an
impression
of frown and not a talkative
person
and, frankly speaking, I did not like him at all. We did not have a chance to talk, but his
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and manners gave me that
impression
.
However
, after we were introduced to each other and had a long talk I changed my opinion about him. He happened to be a very sensitive and kind
person
.
Secondly
, I believe that the true
impression
about a
person
can be made only after people
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at least a few weeks with each other . I think that a
person
shows his or her internal characteristics when in danger .
Moreover
, some people , especially celebrities, tend to hide their weaknesses and not attractive sides in order to please an audience. In conclusion , I believe that
first
impression
is very often wrong . I must confess that I unconsciously judge a
person
by his or her
first
appearance but I tell myself that
this
is subject to change and try to keep my opinion with me.
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