You live with a roommate at university but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: Who you are The problem What you suggest they do

Dear Sir, My name is Neethu Babu, I am a final year student at UCOL University and I reside in Cabinwood hall of residence, Rotorua in
room
number 320. I am writing
this
letter in relation to the issue that I am facing at the moment with my present roommate. She shifted to my
room
last
month and since
then
she has been a complete nuisance to me as well as to the neighbouring rooms. She is quite loud while talking on
smartphone
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at midnight and totally messy with her things. It is very difficult to cope with her, as she never listens to my concern, which I have shared with her numerous time. I am in dilemma, as I am not able to focus on my studies all due to the immense noise and
filthyness
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of the
room
. I would like to request you to kindly allow me to change my
room
to single occupancy
,
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so that I can escape the trauma that I am in at the moment or could you give her a warning so that she could
ammend
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her ways. Either
of
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way done, I would be thankful to you. Hope to hear a positive word regarding
this
. Yours faithfully, Neethu Babu
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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