Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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opine that abroad
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skills shall be commenced for the students in their primary education, according to me, placing it into secondary or higher secondary levels could inevitably prove to be advantageous.
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who believe that learning a foreign
language
at
primary
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level derives constructive benefits would argue that children can develop
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and professionalism.
This
shall enhance their will to prepare for the competitive world with respect to
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culture
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.
For instance
, many European institutes have laid a foundation course on inculcating a foreign
language
like Japanese and Korean.
This
is due to the belief that at a younger age,
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stimulates faster, resulting in grasping definite and better prospects of knowledge.
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, introducing
such
courses at
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years of
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professional expertise.
On the other hand
, if my thoughts are to be believed, I certainly advocate
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language
courses from the lower standards by either making it optional or eliminating totally.
This
is because it can inexplicably sideline the core subjects
such
as Maths and Science, thereby hindering
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of students in a long run. To quote an example, if
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study is to be considered, more than
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number of students perform
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in the preliminary subjects due to lack of focus and
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burden of complementary lectures,
consequently
turning their back from
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goal.
Thus
, the opportunity of learning overseas languages can be thought of in the later stages of their lives. In conclusion,
although
learning distinct languages curate immense benefits considering age factor and skill development, I reckon that enabling
such
course in the
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section could not only aid in being attentive to primary subjects but
also
prove to be considerate for the children.
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