Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that educational institutes have been playing an incredible role to educate the
students
. It is,
therefore
, some
people
contend that high
school
ought to introduce the
subject
of the worldwide newscast, while others opine the notion and consider it worthless.
This
essay will discuss both the viewpoints in detail along with my personal perspective as I think that inculcation of
news
related
subject
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should not be required.
To begin
with, the vast majority of
people
favouring
to include
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the
news
around the globe in the
school
curriculum so that children could get familiar with what is happening in the different nations.
As a result
, they can get international exposure while sitting in their classroom and in the future, if they have to opt any foreign country for the higher
study
,
then
they could differentiate easily. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of
students
who have migrated to the world's renowned countries, after searching each and every aspect of that particular place.
Thus
, these few instances make it clear that the
news
headlines as a
subject
could be sustainable in the long run.
Conversely
, the other group of
people
have a different narrative for the concern. Because according to them, the curriculum is already overloaded with a number of different subjects and to add on one more course could be stressful for the learners.
Also
, global
news
in the
school
syllabus will not bolster the individual student as some have an interest in their own country's headlines.
For example
, according to a survey organized in 2017, 50-70% of
students
were not aware of the current
news
that was telecasted nationally or internationally. Overall, due to the massive
study
related material, intermediate
school
students
hardly have time to cover their course subjects at a required time. To conclude, the
people
who are forcing the
study
of worldwide current situations have an entire understanding, whereas, other
people
's
point
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of view could not be ignored simultaneously. According to my opinion,
instead
of adding worldwide
news
subjects,
school
authorities should focus on the General Knowledge of
students
as a whole, as GK is already a
subject
in
the
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school
study
.
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