Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that educational institutes have been playing an incredible role to educate the
students
. It is, therefore
, some people
contend that high school
ought to introduce the subject
of the worldwide newscast, while others opine the notion and consider it worthless. This
essay will discuss both the viewpoints in detail along with my personal perspective as I think that inculcation of news
related subject
should not be required.
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subjects
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To begin
with, the vast majority of people
favouring to include
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news
around the globe in the school
curriculum so that children could get familiar with what is happening in the different nations. As a result
, they can get international exposure while sitting in their classroom and in the future, if they have to opt any foreign country for the higher study
, then
they could differentiate easily. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of students
who have migrated to the world's renowned countries, after searching each and every aspect of that particular place. Thus
, these few instances make it clear that the news
headlines as a subject
could be sustainable in the long run.
Conversely
, the other group of people
have a different narrative for the concern. Because according to them, the curriculum is already overloaded with a number of different subjects and to add on one more course could be stressful for the learners. Also
, global news
in the school
syllabus will not bolster the individual student as some have an interest in their own country's headlines. For example
, according to a survey organized in 2017, 50-70% of students
were not aware of the current news
that was telecasted nationally or internationally. Overall, due to the massive study
related material, intermediate school
students
hardly have time to cover their course subjects at a required time.
To conclude, the people
who are forcing the study
of worldwide current situations have an entire understanding, whereas, other people
's point
of view could not be ignored simultaneously. According to my opinion, Fix the agreement mistake
points
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instead
of adding worldwide news
subjects, school
authorities should focus on the General Knowledge of students
as a whole, as GK is already a subject
in the
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