Some believe it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment, others think people are responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the
last
two or three decades, the global environment has been affecting enormously than ever before due to
the
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globalization.
However
, some think that the authority should have the responsibility of protect of the surroundings, while others believe that
people
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the main responsible of
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care
this
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both opinions for the following reasons. On the one hand, the
government
has a lot of resources than normal
people
such
as financial, workforce, power and etc.
In other words
, the authorities should provide the
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mandatory

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law and
regualtions
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regulations

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for
perotecting
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protecting

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our circumstances especially the multinational companies wastage. Taking New York,
for instance
,
people
will not travel by any
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vehicles

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on
sunday
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due to reduce the pollution,
this
order has provided by the
government
and
people
should adhere rules.
In addition
, the ministry has a plethora of workforce,
as a result
, they can do anything
for
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protect
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the
climate
such
as planting
the
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trees

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tress
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in urban areas. Obviously, the ministry
have
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a tremendous resources
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so
the
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environmental protection is
the
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essential responsible.
Conversely
, an individual
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cannot ignore to save the
climate
, there are have some responsibility too.
This
means normal folks must adhere to the
government
rules and regulations, do not behave any adverse effect to the circumstance
such
as using and burning the plastics. Taking India,
for instance
, folks have not been using plastic products, they have been planting so many trees
to
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their's surroundings.
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,
normal
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person
alson
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has
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responsible
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to save the
climate
. To conclude, these days global warming is a
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aspects
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to the population. The
government
has more
responsible
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for protecting the environment
like
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providing
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strict rules, the public
also
has some
responsibile
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responsibility
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to
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this
namely adhere the authority regulations and planting more trees.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion, about
this
, both are the
government
and the
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will
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together to save the
climate
whereas the ministry has more responsible than the population.
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