At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages?

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Nowadays,the crowd of mature young
people
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in nations relatively is more than the number of elderly
people
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.
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there are a number of
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accruing to
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,I believe the benefits involved are more. On the plus side,there are some advantages for the countries with an abundance amount of young adults
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compare to old
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population
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with,mature young
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are more energetic and vibrant but
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prone to be valuable human resources,that both government and
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can benefit from them,despite their physical ability and intelligence they can be efficient man-power in all aspects of the community to organize and sustain country plans in areas like sociality,civilizations,industries ,science,research,business and practical skills.
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,young
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are more interested to build their future than the old ones so they are keen to gain academic knowledge and skills to earn certificates and experiences which is related to their passionate career to find the job because they are at the beginning of their life path and they are more motivated to build they life base on their ambitious wich is good for them to fulfil their desires but
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to be a beneficial person for the
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,the large number of elderly compare to young adults has serious consequences.the most axiomatic argument is concerned with is the ability of fecund and fertilization that by ageing
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more men and women lose their power fertilization due to their physical circumstances because the human body has a well-defined opportunity to breed.so it might lead to losing the country vibrant but
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extinction of some descent.
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,nation will face lack of human resource that will give rise to economic,social,and industry issues
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if countries face the lack of workers in factories the speed of production will deplete,so the
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tackle concrete problems like lowering the speed of production,lack of human resources for labour and shipping in industries and low amount of employees in companies.so by ageing
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community might face manifold issues. to conclude,regardless of drawbacks,I believe raising the old
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compare to young adults can be problematic for countries as their human resources and fertility may be put in jeopardy.
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