When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?(

Opinions are divided as to whether international
entertainments
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would negatively affect cultural diversity. Despite the fact that there are some drawbacks, I believe that it brings about much more benefits. There are some reasons why I argue against that
this
platform would adversely affect our culture.
Firstly
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international
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the international
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medias
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could encourage
people
around the world
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the different views of other typical cultures, leading to
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our societies to be closer.
Secondly
,
although
it would entice
people
to hold other traditions, the sentimental value of their own cultures has still been on
people
's minds.
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, various adverts, goods or even films have influenced the way we used to be, the respect of our own conventional ideas is impossible to disappear completely.
However
, it does not mean that there is no effect on cultural aspects. It is undeniable that these ubiquitous media
such
as TV programmes, movies, fashion shows and so on, have changed our lives compared with the past. Populations might hold other customs to behave from being enticed in
this
kind of entertainment.
For instance
, teenagers who always are entertained by
this
will mimic the
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of other foreigners which can adversely affect their own
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. In doing so, the conventional customs that ancient
people
have preserved carefully
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might vanish to make way for multiculturalism like a variety of nations nowadays. In conclusion, I can understand why some
people
hold the idea of these media could impact our wisdom, but it seems to me that it is not possible to let
this
disappear.
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