Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays , there are many people who think about ways to develop public view I think increasing
health
. Someone said we should increase sports
facilities
when others think that there are other ways. This
essay will discuss both of these views.
To start with , sports
facilities
are one of the most effective measurements that can measure how well of the public health
. For example
, in the country which has more sports
,facilities
the population in that country tend to have a good life with a healthy body because they can workout
wherever they want. Correct your spelling
work out
Secondly
, the more number of sports
facilities
the less of the cost and fee that public have to pay to use sports
facilities
.This
will benefit the crowd who have no money to pay for a fee to work out at a good sports
centre. In my opinion , I think increase number of sports
facilities
will have more benefits and it is an opportunity for families who do not have money for the exercise
On the other hand
, there is
other ideas to improve public Change the verb form
are
health
. For example
, educating the student about how important health
is and teaching them to do exercise
every week at school or school can create events like exercise
every Tuesday morning before going to study. On top of that , the government should promote a campaign about exercise
every day at least 30 mins per day will help to improve the work of the body and help people to understand that stay healthy is the most important thing to do because when you stay healthy do not get sick you can do anything that you want to.
In conclusion , there are different views about improving public health
both increasing the number of sports
facilities
and other ways like educating students and promoting campaigns about exercise
. In my point of ,Add an article
a
the
sports
facilities
is a good option to do.Submitted by nppwrs on
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