Some people think news has no connection to the people lives. So it is a waste of time to read the news in newspaper and watch television news program. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It's a reality that new generations are looking for some connection with the media but is not easy because nowadays people have more option and they are on hurry all the time, indeed they can not make the right decision and they frustrated with themself. In
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tendency. On one hand, newspaper and tv shows have been modifying by generations and they had faced a problem to reach the goal of audiences year by year because the people are getting different channels of communication than before, there are more offers thanks to the internet
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expensive and easy to access. When you get a new subscription for an important newspaper by their platform, they offer to match your interest with news, the app asks for what kind of sport do you like, if you like finances or your prefered science, what kind of science,
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you can make your newspaper for you own. Same as a restaurant menu, you just make your order.
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, young people are developing to do all fast, they can not allow to take time to enjoy a movie or even worse if the movie is not 5 start they prefered just wacht the thriller and the possibilities to go to the cinema is minimum. The tendency is to see short videos, not one minute but just 30 seconds or less, and I guess
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sensationalized
  • biased
  • misinformation
  • alternative sources
  • public opinion
  • awareness
  • fostering
  • sense of community
  • information overload
  • shaping
  • productive activities
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