telecommuting is becoming the way of the future. Discuss the pros and cons of this tendency.

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Contemporary, The
world
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becoming smaller day by day and our future will depend only on telecommuting. It has pros like connect anywhere in the
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.
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, it has cons like
people
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becoming lazy. The advantages and disadvantages will be discussed in detail in the below paragraphs.
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with, telecommuting has many types like calling facility, Internet facility for chatting, surfing and video calls and so on.
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can talk with their family if they are anywhere in the
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.
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, right now, I’m in Germany, and my family lives in India so by video call I can talk with them daily.
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, Due to pandemic online study is possible only by telecommuting. In contradiction,
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don’t like to be physically fit and they becoming addicted to it, due to COVID-19 all things are doing on the online-only like study, meetings, works and so on.
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, I have habited online classes so ,after classes , I prefer to sleep only so I couldn’t maintain my physical health.
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, the
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becoming smaller but
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are going far away from relationships. Nowadays
people
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less prefer to meet physically
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of meet online more.
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, the public has no option they must have to accept
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tendency because it’s helpful to make our life easy. The coin has two sides so it has
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disadvantaged so the public can control to use and
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can use in right direction
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of doing misuse of it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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