telecommuting is becoming the way of the future. Discuss the pros and cons of this tendency.

#future #tendency

Contemporary, The

world

becoming smaller day by day and our future will depend only on telecommuting. It has pros like connect anywhere in the

world

However

, it has cons like

people

becoming lazy. The advantages and disadvantages will be discussed in detail in the below paragraphs.

To begin

with, telecommuting has many types like calling facility, Internet facility for chatting, surfing and video calls and so on.

People

can talk with their family if they are anywhere in the

world

For example

, right now, I’m in Germany, and my family lives in India so by video call I can talk with them daily.

Moreover

, Due to pandemic online study is possible only by telecommuting. In contradiction,

people

don’t like to be physically fit and they becoming addicted to it, due to COVID-19 all things are doing on the online-only like study, meetings, works and so on.

For instance

, I have habited online classes so ,after classes , I prefer to sleep only so I couldn’t maintain my physical health.

Furthermore

, the

world

becoming smaller but

people

are going far away from relationships. Nowadays

people

less prefer to meet physically

instead

of meet online more.

However

, the public has no option they must have to accept

this

tendency because it’s helpful to make our life easy. The coin has two sides so it has

also

disadvantaged so the public can control to use and

also

can use in right direction

Instead

of doing misuse of it.

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telecommuting is becoming the way of the future. Discuss the pros and cons of this tendency.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Social interaction between people are destroyed by technology. Do you agree or disagree.

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

In today's digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. this accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people say that in all levels of educations, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?