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Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

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In
this
 modern age, technology has become popular in our life, especially
communication
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in communication
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. While there are those people who claim that face to face interaction is better than sending
the
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texts, I entirely agree with
this
 statement because of the interactions between each other.
This
 essay will discuss the advantage side of
this
communiation
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communication
 approach.
To begin
 with, written
communication
 has been used for centuries and it has a positive impact in their way, whereas the drawbacks are the receiver could not know what exactly the
expresions
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expressions
expression
 is because the alphabet can not explain the morale of the writer.
For example
, there are many couples nowadays
break
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who break
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 up because of misunderstanding the texts despite it should not happen like
this
. Another example is written language is not compromise,
therefore
 the writer should use the words properly. Having said that, these approaches are one of the alternative ways
for
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communication
.
However
, seeing facial expressions are one of the most crucial
thing
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 for
communication
 because they will know
reaction
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the reaction
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 from those listeners.
For instance
, an employee asked to turn on their camera for
online
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an online
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 meeting despite
use
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 only voice is enough. To conclude, I agree with what many people believe because most people prefer to talk to their companions in real life rather than communicate virtually in order to understand completely.
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