IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 4

Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #books #imagination #language #skills #tv
Last
 few decades after inventing and spreading TV and
internet
Correct article usage
the internet
show examples
 all over the world we can observe a serious public discussion about
the a
Choose an article
the
show examples
 role and significance of
books
 and papers. How does reading influence people’s imagination and
language
 skills? Or has TV and video the same effect? For me the answer is obvious:
books
 and reading are vital and I will analyze the reasons in
this
 essay.
First
 of all, literature works and films are genres that assume totally different ways of giving information. A written text has to tell a story and express an essence by means of words and a reader is forced to use his imagination to recreate the whole world of things and people, their emotions and thoughts.
This
 is always a personal view for everyone and it strongly depends on one’s lifetime experience and
make
Change the verb form
makes
show examples
 you visualize the characters and the environment. TV and films provide
ready-to-use
Add an article
a ready-to-use
the ready-to-use
show examples
 picture for an audience, that implies a passive consuming of
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
content and there are few possibilities for viewer’s fantasies. Only a book gives you
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
plenty of time to stop and think, sometimes to reflect, not the movie does. Without a doubt, only a written form has an advantage of a limitless plot, a direct transmission of
author’s
Correct article usage
the author’s
show examples
 ideas and feelings to readers’ minds.
Secondly
,
language
 skills can definitely be improved from reading.
In contrast
 with
conversational
Correct article usage
the conversational
show examples
language
 of films,
books
 utilize all capacity and richness of grammatical structures and vocabulary. Literature serves as a global tool for saving a
language
 and
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
knowledge. By regular using
books
 people expand their vocabulary, master complex
language
 constructions and improve
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
literacy. In fact, only a process of reading is able to activate the parts of
human’s
Correct article usage
the human’s
show examples
 brain that
helps
Change the verb form
help
show examples
 you to memorize and structure
an information
Remove the article
information
a piece of information
show examples
 in the most effective way. Apparently, just watching and listening makes it more difficult for people to gain knowledge and enhance their communication potential. In conclusion, I strongly believe that reading is an essential and vital instrument for humans to save and enrich their languages and develop creativity and thinking abilities, as well as to upgrade their communication skills
Submitted by skypelanguages7pay on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: